My grandchild's eyes

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My grandchild's eyes

Postby Gregorygregg1 on April 25th, 2015, 12:43 am 

I look into these new eyes and see
The flow of life through the material world.
Perhaps it is a delusion on my part
And this is a metaphor, not reality at all.
But I see the flow, and how can I deny
The reality I see.
Life is a current
That flows through the material of this planet.
You and I are either the material
Through which life passes,
Or we are the current.
It is our choice.
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Re: My grandchild's eyes

Postby Marshall on April 25th, 2015, 1:17 am 

Nice. I like it. Thanks.

Maybe the best I can hope for is to be a little of both: part material, and sometimes part of the current as well.
The poem is inspirational and calls on us to choose to be part of the current of life.
Marshall
 


Re: My grandchild's eyes

Postby BadgerJelly on April 25th, 2015, 3:09 am 

Or we are just some kind of time farts the universe happens to produce ... I do prefer your view though GG :)
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