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I am looking for some feedback on my drawing

Postby awake11 on August 19th, 2018, 9:29 pm 



Good or bad feedback is welcome.
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Re: I am looking for some feedback on my drawing

Postby zetreque on August 19th, 2018, 9:35 pm 

I was trying to watch the drawing but the political ad that is right below it that appears part of the post is noxious!

The little lines you are drawing out of the circles almost give it depth but they are not ordered enough to give it depth.
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Re: I am looking for some feedback on my drawing

Postby awake11 on August 19th, 2018, 9:40 pm 

The little lines you are drawing out of the circles almost give it depth but they are not ordered enough to give it depth.


Yeah, I couldn't keep them consistent. Thanks a lot for the feedback though.
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Re: I am looking for some feedback on my drawing

Postby Watson on August 30th, 2018, 3:08 pm 

I'm not sure what feedback you are looking for? It is to small and there is not enough of it other than circles. The clip doesn't show want little detail that might be there.
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Re: I am looking for some feedback on my drawing

Postby Brent696 on September 1st, 2018, 10:32 pm 

Years and years ago in school, when we should have been doing our lessons, a friend and I would draw missiles blowing up tanks and stuff, intricate explosions as we drew > > > over and over filling up large areas of paper.

PS, if you click in the title area of the movie box, it will open it in a new browser and you tube, a lot bigger.
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Re: I am looking for some feedback on my drawing

Postby Serpent on September 2nd, 2018, 12:06 am 

We don't need it bigger; we need it faster. And it would nice to arrive somewhere.
Cilia. OK. No music. (It might help. I un-X-ed my speaker because I expected an explanation or accompaniment. )
Well, OK. Another round of cilia. What for?
And then?
When somebody shows me a thousand folds of paper, they usually finish with - ta-da! - a swan! or something.
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