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Freeform Poetry

Postby Lomax on April 19th, 2012, 4:47 pm 

I recently started a poetry blog, and called it "Living In Freeform" (for reasons explained in the first post). However, perhaps this was a bad idea because I haven't actually discovered all that much free form poetry that I like.

What are examples of people's favourite free form poems? I love several from Harmonium by Wallace Stevens:

The Plot Against the Giant wrote:First Girl

When this yokel comes maundering,
Whetting his hacker,
I shall run before him,
Diffusing the civilest odors
Out of geraniums and unsmelled flowers.
It will check him.

Second Girl

I shall run before him,
Arching cloths besprinkled with colors
As small as fish-eggs.
The threads
Will abash him.

Third Girl

Oh, la...le pauvre!
I shall run before him,
With a curious puffing.
He will bend his ear then.
I shall whisper
Heavenly labials in a world of gutturals.
It will undo him.


Cortège for Rosenbloom wrote:Now, the wry Rosenbloom is dead
And his finical carriers tread
On a hundred legs, the tread
Of the dead.
Rosenbloom is dead.

They carry the wizened one
Of the color of horn
To the sullen hill,
Treading a tread
In unison for the dead.

Rosenbloom is dead.
The tread of the carriers does not halt
On the hill, but turns
Up the sky.
They are bearing his body into the sky.

It is the infants of misanthropes
And the infants of nothingness
That tread
The wooden ascents
Of the ascending of the dead.

It is turbans they wear
And boots of fur
As they tread the boards
In a region of frost,
Viewing the frost,

To a chirr of gongs
And a chitter of cries
And the heavy thrum
Of the endless tread
That they tread;

To a jangle of doom
And a jumble of words
Of the intense poem
Of the strictest prose
Of Rosenbloom.

And they bury him there,
Body and soul,
In a place in the sky.
The lamentable tread!
Rosenbloom is dead.
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on April 19th, 2012, 5:09 pm 

On the wasting rock
Beneath the gnarled tree
A man spoke with a rusty growl

"Be still my children.
Be calm and void.
Bury the rock and burn the tree!"

On a wasted land
In a pit of ash
A man curled up and howled
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Lomax on April 19th, 2012, 5:26 pm 

Nice :) is it one of your own? I couldn't find it on Google.

For some reason it reminded me of Antonio Machado. I don't think Machado wrote in free form, but when his poetry is translated to English a lot of it comes out looking free:

Songs VI wrote: Castille night;
the song is said,
or, better, unsaid.
When all sleep
I'll go to the window.
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Whut on April 19th, 2012, 6:39 pm 

Faith in a bubble for you;
thoroughly disrobed,
for you were made
to fit the absurd.

Forgo that despair,
so the whole may begin
to illuminate itself
where you stand.

"INSERT PRETENTIOS COMMENT ABOUT HOW BEST PLACE TO FIND FREEFORM POETRY IS WITHIN YOURSLEF ECT ;d"
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on April 19th, 2012, 6:42 pm 

Whut wrote:Faith in a bubble for you;
thoroughly disrobed,
for you were made
to fit the absurd.

Forgo that despair,
so the whole may begin
to illuminate itself
where you stand.

"INSERT PRETENTIOS COMMENT ABOUT HOW BEST PLACE TO FIND FREEFORM POETRY IS WITHIN YOURSLEF EICT ;d"


Obviously an original Whut ;)
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Whut on April 19th, 2012, 8:10 pm 

I was looking this up, an I thought this quote was amazing:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse

No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job.'
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on April 19th, 2012, 9:45 pm 

I like that one
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby mtbturtle on April 19th, 2012, 9:49 pm 

Oread
By H. D.
Whirl up, sea—
whirl your pointed pines,
splash your great pines
on our rocks,
hurl your green over us,
cover us with your pools of fir.
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby weakmagneto on April 19th, 2012, 10:05 pm 

Is this a free form poem?

The Struggle

Toxic dreams
Shattered plains
Loving minds
Solid rains

Every wandering current,
Like a wind vortex
Curling and swirling without a pattern
As are the thoughts that linger in my mind

Growing seedling
Striving for life
At mercy of my whim
I have the choice whether you live or die

Dying passion
Hallowed values
Another year stolen while I haunt the familiar dark places within myself
Why do I cry out?
When there is no one to hear

I recoup my strength
For a fight I deem worthwhile
Is it too much?
Where do I start?
Start from your heart, the warrior whispers…
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on April 19th, 2012, 10:25 pm 

mtbturtle wrote:Oread
By H. D.
Whirl up, sea—
whirl your pointed pines,
splash your great pines
on our rocks,
hurl your green over us,
cover us with your pools of fir.


Superb imagery! Makes me think of something from a Gothic fairy tale painting in the style of van Gough.
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Lomax on April 20th, 2012, 12:57 am 

Keep 'em coming folks, I love these :)

Weakmagneto - I think so, although there's usually not consensus even among the experts about whether a poem is free form. I know some people dispute whether T.S. Eliot's poetry was free form, instead insisting it was just polymetric. Although I think this is splitting hairs.
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on April 20th, 2012, 8:57 am 

Not exactly poetry but poetic :

"We burn so hard yet shed so little light"

From Galilee by Clive Barker
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Lomax on April 20th, 2012, 2:26 pm 

Not exactly free form either :P
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby mtbturtle on April 20th, 2012, 2:58 pm 

So what...more exactly is free form?
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Lomax on April 20th, 2012, 3:02 pm 

mtbturtle wrote:So what...more exactly is free form?

I wondered whether I should have put that in the OP. I should say "free verse" really. It's just poetry without a consistent meter, rhyme scheme etc (although I'm not too sure what the "etc" might constitute).
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby mtbturtle on April 27th, 2012, 2:55 pm 

Lomax,

that's what I kind of thought. thanks for posting your site. keep us updated from time to time :)
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on May 7th, 2012, 5:06 am 

The scaffolding shimmered; perturbed by the reluctant light of morn.
Spectrum's arched through the rising dew.
He had found a way.
The Temple was near completion and its completion would birth its destruction.
With joyful nostalgia he weeped in triumphant failure.
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Whut on May 7th, 2012, 12:25 pm 

BadgerJelly wrote:The scaffolding shimmered; perturbed by the reluctant light of morn.
Spectrum's arched through the rising dew.
He had found a way.
The Temple was near completion and its completion would birth its destruction.
With joyful nostalgia he weeped in triumphant failure.


Enjoyed this.

I imagine it's about chaos an order; the percieved cosmic dualism of creative and destructive forces; and how they eventualy unfold in our own lives, in a more familiar way. Are you into alchemy? The symbolism reminds me of that.
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on May 7th, 2012, 11:04 pm 

Lomas pointed out a mistake :S Should be "Spectra" :P

"Weeped" though is a play on words between "reaped" and "wept". That one was purposeful ... did you notice it?

Whut I do not like to use words such as Alchemy, Spirit, Mysticism, Religion or Magick to define what I mean because they are words that have been VERY misconstrued by society over the years. I have had an interest in Occultism for MANY years and have done a fair amount of research in my pursuit for understanding WHY people believe in strange things and where religion stemmed from.

This piece of writing is actually very personal to me, and everyone I believe? It is my understanding of the human condition.

I suggest reading Asclepius. I read it and found it could practically have been written by me. I have already mentioned this to you. It is very much like the Tao Te Ching in its philosophical resonance.

Someone mentioned elsewhere about my metaphor of the Labyrinth to describe consciousness and this is almost the same thing IMO.

... Anyway I just stopped to think for about 30mins how to say what I mean but I cannot yet. The only way I know how to express what I have experienced is by asking questions and hoping someone latches onto them and tries to answer them so I can then ask more questions ... sorry if I am rambling :P I have so much I want to give without giving and speak without speaking.

It is hard to explain to people that art is science and science is art when they have been taught the exact opposite most of their lives. It saddens me :(
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby Jimmy555 on May 20th, 2012, 3:48 am 

I like that .
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Re: Freeform Poetry

Postby BadgerJelly on January 28th, 2013, 2:40 am 

A light is sketchy
Fetching in all memories of hope.
An ambling ambiance proceeds the truth.
Like mesmerising shards of diamond a diadem
Of grace befalls the crown of vision
Scaffolding and entwining the eyes that peer
Towards an endless destination.

With gleeful laughs we come tumbling
With spirited bounds we leap through hoops
Hoops that frame our lives
Lives that fill our hearts
And with a start we begin again
With a taste of smatterings
A caress of blabberings we
Tease the pattern into our beings.
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